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Sobering

Mar 17, 2004, 5:24:44 PM by ~broken-doll666
Literature / Poetry / Old Poetry Structure / Dark

Taking the blade in my hand,
Nothing that I can stand.
Thinking about that blood cascading out,
I can’t feel anything now.
Can’t get out,
Please help me!
As I press the blade against my skin,
I think of my friends, my family, my only sin,
And what I would do without them.
Please help me,
Get me out of here,
I can’t stand it any longer.
My sobering becomes wild like the clouds in the sky,
As a big black tear falls from my eye.
I just like to see how much pain I can stand,
I say to myself.
I can’t do it,
I fall to the ground,
No one to pick me up,
Only the knife in one hand,
And my heart in the other.

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Wanting I feel alone,
Cold, distressed in this world,
The misfit of my family,
No one to care for me,
No one for me to care for,
My life is a wreak if only you knew,
Life without love,
Is not so true,
Life with out love,
Thats all I want,
Me, i want to be held tigfht when it is cold and mean,
Blow kisses to eachother also,
People dont know how lucky they are,
To have something,
I feel like i am begging to have someone true,
So i will stop,
And you can think this through.Wanting by ~broken-doll666

Just Like You I wish i was perfect, flawless, just like you,
I wish i have something to live for, just like you,
I wish i have a love, just like you do,
I wish i have a perfect body, just like you do,
I wish our mother worshiped me, like she's to you,
I wish i was intelligent, just like you,
I wish i was elegant, just like you.......
~But all i want to do is be me again....not youJust Like You by ~broken-doll666

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CXXXII by ~headbanger1369

She Needs She wanders alone,
She has to appear fine.
She can't let them see her cry.
She desperately needs someone,
Someone to understand and love her,
Someone to care,
The scars cut into her body
are seen by all, but no concern
is issued for her
They'd prefer her gone,
She'd prefer herself gone, too.
She can't handle this life anymore,
The pain, the looks, the loneliness.
She has to get out.
She has to be free of this life
that only taunts and tortures her.
Her last moments...
She wrote a note to her mom,
Because she was the only one who cared.
Her last thoughts...
Filled with regrets for
The life she could have had.She Needs by ~ProfoundDesolation

a single rose The single rose in a garden of weeds,
and the innocent wind that knocks against a solitary petal.
As you dream, the thorns dig into your flesh,
like a thousand blades of metal.
A shift of wind and disaster beckons,
death comes in frozen flakes,
A little girl plays, and more destroyed flowers
With every crown she makes.
Rain; tears of the crescent moon,
fall and mix with pollen,
drops slide from leaves and stem
to mimic angels fallena single rose by ~winglessbutterfly

LXXXI by ~headbanger1369

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stupid me......

Apr 25, 2004, 7:22:07 PM by ~broken-doll666
Journals / Personal

Yeah exactly like my subject is...gues what>?.....i cut the side of my finger off, i wa cutting picters with a cutting slicer thing i dont know what it is called..but anywayz.....yeah kinda dumb here, it didnt hurt that bad but i wished i cut it on the right hand cause then i wouldnt beable to write

..but anywayz i gotta go later

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Current Residence: Kimbo
Interests: writing, reading, drawing, and sleeping dont we all¿
Favourite movie: Fight Club {0_o}
Favourite genre of music: punk/punk rock/hardcore rock/heavy metal
Favourite poet or writer: hum Shakespeare...Poe....blah blah blah............
Skin of choice: human
Favourite cartoon character: Ren & Stimpy gotta love em......
Personal Quote: You were born an original...don't die a copy........You idiot!-Ren

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~headbanger1369 May 24, 2004

thanks for the favorite lauren, i really appreciate it

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Everybody whispers where birds fall dead
I smell the yellow sickness churning inside your head
Wiping flecks of foam, twisting with rabies
Bloody, we run through these fields of dead daisies

~kbspe May 1, 2004

Thanks for another favorite!

~kbspe Apr 25, 2004

Thanks for the fav sweetie

~Psyco-in-a-box Apr 22, 2004

Im leaving DA and im going around thanking all of the people who made any effort to either help with my work or make me feel better so... thanks

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ARRRGHH! I be the lonely pirate, I want your booty, so prepare to be boarded
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If Opposites attract, we must be the same

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~broken-doll666 Apr 22, 2004

Why Luke>?...yesh

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-People too often love things and use people...when we should be using things and loving people... You were born an original...Don't die a copy...

~Psyco-in-a-box Apr 22, 2004

what? me leaving? ... just stuff

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ARRRGHH! I be the lonely pirate, I want your booty, so prepare to be boarded
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If Opposites attract, we must be the same

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~bjt Apr 11, 2004

Hi!

Thanks for the

on Elle and for the

Beth

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Beth

~broken-doll666 Apr 16, 2004

Yeah no problem

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-People too often love things and use people...when we should be using things and loving people... You were born an original...Don't die a copy...

~ProfoundDesolation Apr 11, 2004

hey lauren!! thank you much for the +faves! i just have to tell you that your gallery is stunning, you're very good.

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Call me a girl. Call me a basketcase. Call me disturbed. Call me an overreactor. Call me whatever you want. Just don't call me crazy. Don't call me fake. I'm the most sane, real person I know.

~broken-doll666 Apr 16, 2004

Oh thank you..your gallary is good too i like your stuff

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-People too often love things and use people...when we should be using things and loving people... You were born an original...Don't die a copy...

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